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I love it! Very interesting, and the description was perfect. The last line was awesome! Great job! :)

Its OK, but I have to agree with the other, its not really cutting it for me. :?

Thanks everybody for your help! I really appreciate it. :D

Very abtract. I really don't know what to say? Sorry. :?

Could be edited, but overall it was a good story. It has potential. Don't let it die. OK :D

Very long, but overall, it was good. Had some confusing parts in it, but very descriptive. :D

I agree. I was very confusing. And the color, whats with that? :?

Nice! very intersting. The Grif guy is very funny, I like him. Waiting the read more. :D

Wonderful!!!!! It was so good! :D

I really liked it. It was great! Keep writing! :D

Awesome, the re-written version rules!

LOVED IT!!!!!!!! it was very good! Keep it up!

I'm a guy, so I don't ND books, but this is real good. I liked it! :D

I loved the wording. It was very descriptive. I like the edited version is really good. TG 8)

It was good. I liked the re-write. I did have me confused at some points, but overall, it was a good story. TG